Plain language: sentences average <20 words, jargon avoided, active voice >50%
Why it matters
The Plain Writing Act of 2010 mandates that federal agencies use plain language in all public-facing documents and websites. Long, passive-voice sentences and unexplained jargon raise the cognitive load for all readers and functionally exclude people with lower literacy levels, non-native English speakers, and users accessing services under stress. When the average sentence exceeds 25 words, comprehension drops sharply for the majority of the U.S. adult population. Non-compliance with the Federal Plain Language Guidelines also signals systemic content governance failure — content that was never reviewed before publication.
Severity rationale
High because content that violates the Plain Writing Act of 2010 and Federal Plain Language Guidelines actively prevents large segments of the public — including non-native English speakers and lower-literacy users — from understanding and using government services they are legally entitled to access.
Remediation
Audit content on at least three public pages (home, about, a service page) using the plainlanguage.gov checklist. Target average sentence length under 20 words, active voice above 50%, and zero unexplained acronyms.
Revise sentences using this pattern:
// Before (passive, 22 words):
"The aforementioned documentation must be submitted in accordance with the
regulations established by the department."
// After (active, 10 words):
"Submit your documents following the department's rules."
For acronyms, expand on first use: "Freedom of Information Act (FOIA)." Use the Hemingway Editor or write-good linter in CI to flag readability regressions before deployment.
DetectionPro
The detection method for this pattern is part of AuditBuffet Pro.
The full method (what to look for, pass and fail conditions, and how results get reported) ships inside the Government Web Standards Audit. The pattern definition, severity rationale, and remediation remain openly licensed under CC-BY-4.0.
External references
- external · plain-writing-act-2010 — Plain Writing Act of 2010 — Requires federal agencies to use plain language in public-facing communications
- external · federal-plain-language-guidelines — Federal Plain Language Guidelines (plainlanguage.gov) — sentence length, active voice, and jargon avoidance standards
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History
- 2026-04-18·v1.0.0·Initial import from gov-web-standards·automated